My own presentation feedback
WWW:
WWW:
- I spoke about the Human rights of Disney
- I involved students into my activities that i created
- I spoke about when, how and by who the Disney company was found by
EBI:
- I could have spoken about the merchandise and franchise of Disney
- I could have spoken about the amount of money made by Disney
- I could have been in depth with how Disney became popular
Can you please add my comments and also upload your presentation and any handouts or pictures that you used? Be more specific about how you could have been more in depth - what would you have added?
ReplyDeleteLR- Add the extra but also please PROOF READ for literacy!
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